I wrote this on the way home tonight after buying some mangos. And yes, that's Mart Laar dressed up as jõuluvana above. Don't ask.
Magused Mangod
Ma ostsin sulle
Midagi süüa
Üheksakummend
Üheksa krooni
Üks
Kaks
Kolm
Neli
Viis
Kuus
Magused Mangod
Mõnus!
What do you think? It's not Paul-Eerik Rummo, but, hey, it's a start.
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Mõnus luuletus!
aga miks 99 krooni?
well, it was originally 99 cents each, as the mangos actually cost 99 cents each, but I figured I'd change it to Kroonid, and that 99 kroons for six mangos would be a realistic price...
Loen juba mitmendat korda ja mõtlen: "Epul on vedanud!"
it's a good start, at least! :)
Oh that's right - it's in that other tense.
Mõned kroonid - üheksakümmend-üheksa krooni.
aitäh.
mangood, luftballoons? Koguaeg 99! Monus on jah!
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